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Post by Tuce Willis on Apr 12, 2008 23:48:10 GMT -5
It doesn't really matter. I'd just like the incredible openness to be added. It'd make it funnier anyway.
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Post by Kai le Chevalier on Apr 12, 2008 23:54:57 GMT -5
I could also co-write my own parts for the story whenever im on, have some ideas but the plot neds to develop first
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Post by magicfreak on Apr 13, 2008 0:13:02 GMT -5
This looks interesting, please include me. If its alright, heres a little info to use.
For me, unless I'm with a friend, I'm very quiet and read a lot in school (sometimes I even read during the class if I'm bored) but when I'm with my friends, I talk and laugh a lot. You can make me a nerd, or loner, or anything like that.
For Jericho, thats pretty simple. He'd pay little attention in class, and while he wouldn't be a bully (hes more like to bully the bullies) he would still be loud and confrontational.
I hope this is alright.
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Post by Klavice Gavin on Apr 13, 2008 0:20:28 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Taizaki walked into the principal's office in which he saw the principal doing some boring principal stuff when he turned around and saw Taizaki. "Why hello there Taizaki! What brings you here?" Klavice said with a grin. "Mr Klavice, I was falsely accused." Taizaki said. "I see... so the teacher thought you were not paying attention when you were." Klavice started to think about something, suddenly the bell rung. "Uhh, Mr Klavice, can we cut this meeting short? I need to get to PE." Taizaki told him. "Very well, run along then." Klavice said. Taizaki walked into the large Gym, it was 3 times the size of any Gym he'd ever seen, spears were poking out of the ground as the PE teacher walked up. She had green hair and she looked not much older then Taizaki himself, the kind of girl AHS would totally fall for, he thought. "My name is Ms Lyn. I am the PE teacher." Lyn said. "Today we will be playing dodgeball." Taizaki grinned, Dodgeball was one of the sports he could easily do. He glanced over beside Ms Lyn and saw AHS socializing with girls. Why'd he have to be so popular? Before he could ponder the thoughts, Ms Lyn blew a whistle and he ran out towards the balls. Taizaki grabbed a ball and quickly chucked it at AHS who easily dodged it. "Better luck next time, pal." AHS laughed. Taizaki knew how athletic AHS was, he could dodge a ball from a mile away with his build, so he had an idea. Before he could ponder thoughts, a young woman pummeled him with a ball with tremendous force. "Looks like I'm out." Taizaki shrugged. They played until there was no-one left standing except AHS. Afterwords, the bell rung and Taizaki went to the cafeteria to meet up with his best friend Animefreak.
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Post by ledcampbell on Apr 13, 2008 0:23:53 GMT -5
Oh dear. You did NOT just say that AHS would be attracted to Lyn.
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Post by animefreak249 on Apr 13, 2008 0:24:23 GMT -5
LOL!!!! Lyn...the gym teacher.
...now what? Jericho blows something up in Physics?
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Post by Kai le Chevalier on Apr 13, 2008 0:26:28 GMT -5
LOL!!!! Lyn...the gym teacher. ...now what? Jericho blows something up in Physics? wouldnt it be chemistry?
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Post by Klavice Gavin on Apr 13, 2008 0:27:44 GMT -5
Yeah, the whole Lyn X AHS thing was a joke, because this story needs humor. Taizaki's next class is Chemistry so maybe I'll add that for the heck of it.
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Post by Kai le Chevalier on Apr 13, 2008 0:32:22 GMT -5
.....this is wrong in so many ways, continue...
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Post by animefreak249 on Apr 13, 2008 0:34:13 GMT -5
....yes...this is wrong in so many ways...except maybe one....
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Post by Sasha Fyer on Apr 13, 2008 0:42:10 GMT -5
Hmmm... I wonder... could you put Sasha, Eiva, and Darrah into this? I'll try and supply you with some basic info.
Sasha would be one of the best students in the class and normally rather docile... however, when class gets chaotic, she'll be the first to tell everyone to shut up. And she hates it when people act like idiots (yes, all of her people have that sort of tendency).
Eiva is pretty much the same as Sasha, only with some more quirks thrown in... you'd have to have read her dialogue in the actual RPs to figure out what makes her a bit weird.
Darrah is where things start to get different. She's almost a jock girl (ALMOST, I say) and tends to push around anyone who bothers her too much. Unlike Sasha and Eiva, she's not the best of students. Not a bad one, but by no means the worst (her people are naturally intelligent, of course).
If you want more info, feel free to ask.
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Post by Klavice Gavin on Apr 13, 2008 0:46:47 GMT -5
Some of the personalities are like that just because they are, and it makes it less bland.
Chapter 4 (I'm just going to skip Lunch): Animefreak walked into his Chemistry class, which he always sat beside Nephenee his girlfriend. He started to draw a picture of Nephenee when Soren the teacher saw him and hit him with Rexcalibur. "No drawing in class." Soren said sternly. "Art critic..." Animefreak mumbled to himself and ignored the teacher as he continued drawing. "Now, everyone is to make a special potion out of two DIFFERENT chemicals A and C, if you mix A and B you will get a chemical reaction." Soren explained as the class took the test tubes and filled them with odd colored liquids. "Heh, heh." Jericho laughed to himself as he purposly mixed A and B causing a chemical reaction to go all over Soren. Soren grumbled to himself and Animefreak and Nephenee burst into laughter at Jericho's prank. After leaving Chemistry Animefreak checked his list of classes and his next was... Drama, the class in which another teacher besides the art teacher actually appreciated his works. Walking into his drama class he looked at the teacher who was a little short for her age, she had silver hair and wore a cloak almost as if she were some kind of witch. "Hello students, I am Ms Micaiah, the drama teacher." Micaiah said. "Today we are going to recite one of Willaim Shakespeare's plays." "Oh god..." Many students mumbled to themselves, Jericho just snicked as he prepared his fake mustache. Micaiah divided the students up into groups to work on rehearsing their boring lines, Jericho was going to make sure he screwed up on purpose. Nephenee was called as Juliet and Jericho as Romeo which ticked off Animefreak because she was HIS girlfriend. "Romeo oh Romeo, where art thou?" Nephenee said. "In this awesome car!" Jericho laughed and drove a hummer into the drama room and honked the horn for everyone to get in the trunk to escape drama class, leaving Nephenee and Animefreak who just shook his head.
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Post by magicfreak on Apr 13, 2008 0:49:42 GMT -5
Haha! Thats great for Jericho. Keep it up!
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Post by Tuce Willis on Apr 13, 2008 0:50:17 GMT -5
Nedz moar AHS, IMO. I liked the car part though.
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Post by Klavice Gavin on Apr 13, 2008 1:09:02 GMT -5
Since it's late and I'm tired, I'll write more tommorow. If you can say there's a main character it kinda alternates from Taizaki and Animefreak's Point of views. So until I write the next chapter, consider this a writers block for any ideas. Oh and Sasha, your trio shall show up in the next chapter.
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